Sunday, September 12, 2010

Thesis

Jane Eyre from Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre reflects Bronte's life because Jane was a strong independent woman, in need of love, had a similar careers and lost a lot of family members early in life.

3 comments:

  1. try restating the beginning of your thesis to eliminate the sense of repeating. Also a few grammar suggestions. use "for" jane was instead of "because" jane was. had similar careers vs. had a similar careers. lost many family members vs. a lot of family member.

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  2. Oops, thank you Onima, I didn't see those errors!

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  3. those suggestions help. Make sure you distinguish how the novel and CB's life differ as well.

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