Good thesis, but I think you have to expend your thought about Antoinette hard tryings to escape and WHY Jane acctually succeeds.
Give examples of this "passive" behavior.
by "two aspects" i assume you mean antoinette and jane? and what exactly do you mean by passive? i think this a original and interesting concept.
you might want to use the jane succeeds part in your essay for evidence and have your thesis just the first part.
What happens to Antoinette? Include this in your thesis? What do you mean by two aspects?Can you lump A into feminism - how about saying the 'feminine existence or struggle' in both novels?
Good thesis, but I think you have to expend your thought about Antoinette hard tryings to escape and WHY Jane acctually succeeds.
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ReplyDeleteby "two aspects" i assume you mean antoinette and jane? and what exactly do you mean by passive? i think this a original and interesting concept.
ReplyDeleteyou might want to use the jane succeeds part in your essay for evidence and have your thesis just the first part.
ReplyDeleteWhat happens to Antoinette? Include this in your thesis? What do you mean by two aspects?Can you lump A into feminism - how about saying the 'feminine existence or struggle' in both novels?
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